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Just doesn't live up to the others. I always loved how the story was told with stunning visuals, and thats where your greatest strength lies. I thought that the narration took away from the viusal storytelling, which left alot to the audiences imagination. The Brackenwood story is very unique, and if you do make a feautre, never compromise your very unique vision to make something epic (The redesigned witch). In fact, if your movie didn't have a word of dialogue, I think that would cinema history. Hope my critiscism was helpful, and best of luck to you in your future endeavors.

December 12, 2009

Author's Response:

All honest criticism is helpful and much appreciated, so thanks :)

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Score: 8

"Pretty good but..."

submission: Sketched - Therapy

date: March 6, 2009

I think you'd benefit alot by taking this to soundbooth or soundtrack pro and doing a little audio sweetening, maybe add some background music or sound effects. All in all really good work.

March 6, 2009

Author's Response:

Although I am against adding background music where it isn't called for I do agree that more attention could go into the audio mix. I spend a LOT of time putting together the dialogue and cutting it so that it is quick paced and flows conversationally, but I don't spend nearly as much time considering sound effects and other filler sounds. I think there is a fine balance though, because too many sound effects would take from the reality of the situation and make it less funny.

Thanks for your review, I will certainly consider your suggestions for future shorts.